Chapter 3 complete


The demo has been updated with the entirety of chapter 3, and lots of edits to the earlier chapters: new details, various scenes were the prose was changed/tweaked/lines added, corrected grammar, fixed small bugs, new choices. So I really recommend giving the demo a re-read before getting to the new content. Enjoy!

Files

BOC public.html Play in browser
Nov 22, 2022

Comments

Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.

(+1)

Gally is a 1700 emo

(1 edit) (+1)

Such a wonderful way to spend the holidays, jumping back into this wonderfully crafted world. The update is so well done, and Chapter 3 was incredible, I love how the relationships developed and how those conversations unfolded. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Rest well and thank you for such a beautiful story.

(+1)

THANK YOUU ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ’Œ๐Ÿ’Œ

(+2)

This was so beautiful ;;_;; Thank you so much, its so so good, your amazing and please PLEASE rest well and keep up the good quality. Wish you the best for 2023 and the rest of the year left.

(+1)

YOOOOO!!!! THANKS a lot

(+1)

YESSSSSSSSS

(+1)

holy shit i'm so excited!!

Deleted 1 year ago
(+2)

Thank you! Well, that scene is specifically written to evoke a tabletop rpg - I've also jokingly referred to the scene as a kind of DnD session, BOC-style. It's just one of the type of games they have in-universe. Plus, the words used there aren't a lot more modern than other words used in the game.

(+1)

Got the email this had updated while at work and now am literally counting down the minutes until I can go home.

(+2)

It was a great update. Thank you so much for writing this story, I love it!

(+3)

IM SPRINTING-

(1 edit) (+4)

ME TOO, LET'S RACE TOGETHER HAHA
Ah, I'm so happy. Our patience rewards us.

(+9)

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us. This really made my day ๐Ÿ’“ I am so happy now. 

As always impeccable writing!!

I loved being Mordred as a child and I very much look forward to what's coming next.

(+2)

Just in perfect time!

(+3)

I love your game very much. Thank you.  I have been waiting for this update.