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I love love love how much the interactions are affected by your past choices! You really get to shape your own character and the story responds in a way that feels natural

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Lance and Arthur are so fucking..

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For a few seconds i thought you didn't finish your sentence. Then I realized.

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and guin sits in the cuck chair. obviously 

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I like this alot, sometimes made me cry because of the position of the mc or maybe because I relate to them. So so so so well written, very very interesting. I know you put all your effort in this, I can tell by the writing. I wish you goodluck on your progress!


ALSO WE LOVE KITTIES!! :3

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This is honestly better than I expected, those reddit comments do NOT play when it comes to IF recs. Off topic, what if we could romance a dragon

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this is so good! Love Elaine so much!

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This is a really fun twine game! 

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Any news on the progress in chapter 5? I was kinda assuming there might would be an update in early October nonetheless i am sure it's going to turn out as perfection..take your time and do let us know if there is any progress UwU

hi, I encounter some error in chapter 5 at the choice where Morgana want us to learn about Elaine and the last choice “"I'll talk to her, to get to know her," you say carefully, "but I don't know if I want to play spy." It feels underhanded.”

I don’t know what this is all about but I want to let you know!

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lovely story! The angst and turmoil is so well written


just a small opinion: chapters 4 and 5 feels like the game is pushing Elaine onto you too hard, forcing you to be interested and befriend her even if it’s not romantic.  It’s either spend time with Elaine or pages and pages of info dump, it’s kinda boring for players that have no interest in her.  It would be great to have more of the other ROs as option to hang out, or even some other characters. 

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haha poor Gareth, Mordred seems to unintentionally hog the attention of their mother, and their uncle (or father-uncle in our case), and can go after the poor fellow's betrothed too - even if he's pretty nice about it all right now.

Great story so far, can't wait for the rest of chapter 5!! and justice for Gareth, best brother

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Gods... I hope the rest of the story drops soon, otherwise I might implode in expectation. Goodjob llama! You've written a story worthy of Camelot!

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this is easily THE best IF i have ever read. the amount of talent, skill, and creativity that has gone into this is genuinely astounding. i love this IF, but i cant help but hate that i have to wait to read more. anyways, im definitely looking forward to the next update. 


side note: gawain route supremacy forever!!!!

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Not to seem unappreciative of the work you put in your work and the astounding skill you get it,i can't help but feel a bit impatient..this whole storyline you have created is soo enticing and trust when i say i am not doing empty flattery when i say,you have just created a masterpiece,soo i was wondering if there is going to be a hypothetical date that will announce when the next update arrives,it kinda will clam my excited nerves down a bit as i will know that i will have something to look forward to and be patient for,i am not asking you to provide a clear date,as i know that you are putting your all into it as can be seen from your writing but a hypothetical date..if possible 

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