So far, I really can't bring myself to like Morgana (As a person, I mean, not how she's written. She's written beautifully❤️).
I do think her hatred towards Uther and Camelot is completely justified, but she still ultimately chose to violate Arthur and bring an incestual child into the world, knowing that they would suffer. I felt my heart twist when Mordred and Morgana's relationship became strained but at the same time I can't in my right mind side with her even if I sympathize with her.
SAME! Having my Mordred feel like a tool for revenge but reveling in their purpose before having their view shattered when they make (gasp) more friends as an adult
Meanwhile playing the game a solely vengeful Mordred breaks my heart. I feel so awful for being mean to Arthur, but at the same time I morbidly love the way that Morgana feeding a vengeful Mordred's hate ironically mirrors how Morgana claims that Merlin is manipulating and deceiving Arthur.
I mean personally,i get your point however well i can see also see how Morgana might have also hold Arthur accountable (which i feel he is in a minor way) as he knowingly accepted the only place of power that could have granted Morgana to take back all that was her,but indeed the action she took to counter that was ultimately a vile with no justification..the same one done to her mother but it was one done by a person broken by injustices done to her..and at that point,i don't think she was thinking from her moral compess but utter desperation and extreme grief even a bit of insanity,in a messed up it is hard not to sympathise with her going to such extreme measures,as she was a child who not only lost her parents but witnessed destruction of all she hold dear
Umm,just out of curiosity is there any news on update of either the patreon or public version of the game?! So far it's been some while and there hasn't been a new update on either..soo yea!? Plus i was wondering is there any set time-limit or dates to these updates or are they random? If so that seems a slightly confusing and inconsistent no offense but i guess that's alright it's a masterpiece of work nonetheless.
This is so amazing and interesting story. I hope author is alright, because it's been a long time since the last update. May i ask a questions of how many chapters will be in the book one, and when expect new updates?
The author is regularly posting on their Patreon (and replied to couple of posts here just a day earlier) so yeah, they're alright. It's just the public version of the demo has pretty low priority, so it doesn't get updated very often.
Such an amazing told story! :) I always hate the part of the day where I cant play in between... Are you locked out of other romance options if you go for Gawain in chapter 3?
Thank you! ❤ And to answer your question, no. You can go for Gawain in chapter 3 (and 4, and 5), and break up later (on good terms or not) and pursue other ROs.
When this game is fully released is it planned on being free or paid? It might say somewhere but cant seem to find it, but if anyone knows I would quite like to know. Also if it would still be playable in browser without need of downloading.
Thank you! ❤ The fully released game will be paid (tho I don't have a price in mind yet, it's something I'll work out once it's done). My plan is to have it available both in browser and for download.
it isn't out yet! llamagirl is still writing boc, and will update the demo until chapter seven i believe? and then she'll upload the full first version of boc to patreon before releasing the full game on itch.
As someone who doesn't really know where to look for all this info knowing that it'll be updated til ch7 is awesome news for me! Honestly I'm so excited to see what happens and Thanks for writing your post? Comment? (Idk how to call it) But thank you for the information
Don't know if this is something the Devs would consider adding but it would be nice to have an option for Mordred to have permanent draconic features ranging from Draconic Eyes, Partial Scales, Fangs, Tail, Talons and Wings. And you could either have only a few or all of them. Could be used as a sign for certain Dragon Riders as a way to showcase their deep connection with Dragons while people of the Pendragon bloodlines or whose bloodlines are strong enough to have more features. They could also make it where they are able to hide certain features if they want to for whatever reasons though if it was me, I wouldn't hide any of them.
only problem with that is that we being Arthur’s child and a few other things are supposed to be secret. Adding those features would be cool but a bit contradictory. After reaching a certain point maybe.
I suppose maybe instead of permanent features it could be enhancements like the scales that you can choose to get if you get on good enough terms with the dragons and SPOILER
the mages who helped create the Dragon Bloods in the first place.
It's been so long since I've read an interactive story where I got genuinely super invested in everything happening, this is amazing so far! Hell, it's so good that I'm leaving a comment on itch.io for the first time ever! I can't wait to see what's next.
(Also, I'm reaaaaally hoping we get the option to kill Lot one day)
Yes! Thanks for asking. Progress is steady but slow. I had a couple bad months (health-wise) , but now I'm feeling better. There isn't enough content yet for a public update, but I've been postig little updates to the demo on Patreon and ko-fi. I've been working on rewriting and expanding on the content featuring the dragon companion, and once I'm done with all of it there will be a public update, however I cannot give you an estimate as to when that would be yet.
This is absolutely amazing 😭🫶 I need more!! I like how there's various different choices to shape Mordred's character and her relationship with others. I'm looking forward to actually meeting Isac, I think he's gonna be the RO I would choose. Can't wait for the update 😍
I love love love how much the interactions are affected by your past choices! You really get to shape your own character and the story responds in a way that feels natural
I like this alot, sometimes made me cry because of the position of the mc or maybe because I relate to them. So so so so well written, very very interesting. I know you put all your effort in this, I can tell by the writing. I wish you goodluck on your progress!
Probably not, the author likely isn't comfortable making a quadruped/animal character a romance option. That and/or the author doesn't include that character as a RO because she has other plans (like some of the other non-romance-able characters)
Any news on the progress in chapter 5? I was kinda assuming there might would be an update in early October nonetheless i am sure it's going to turn out as perfection..take your time and do let us know if there is any progress UwU
hi, I encounter some error in chapter 5 at the choice where Morgana want us to learn about Elaine and the last choice “"I'll talk to her, to get to know her," you say carefully, "but I don't know if I want to play spy." It feels underhanded.”
I don’t know what this is all about but I want to let you know!
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lovely story! The angst and turmoil is so well written
just a small opinion: chapters 4 and 5 feels like the game is pushing Elaine onto you too hard, forcing you to be interested and befriend her even if it’s not romantic. It’s either spend time with Elaine or pages and pages of info dump, it’s kinda boring for players that have no interest in her. It would be great to have more of the other ROs as option to hang out, or even some other characters.
haha poor Gareth, Mordred seems to unintentionally hog the attention of their mother, and their uncle (or father-uncle in our case), and can go after the poor fellow's betrothed too - even if he's pretty nice about it all right now.
Great story so far, can't wait for the rest of chapter 5!! and justice for Gareth, best brother
this is easily THE best IF i have ever read. the amount of talent, skill, and creativity that has gone into this is genuinely astounding. i love this IF, but i cant help but hate that i have to wait to read more. anyways, im definitely looking forward to the next update.
Not to seem unappreciative of the work you put in your work and the astounding skill you get it,i can't help but feel a bit impatient..this whole storyline you have created is soo enticing and trust when i say i am not doing empty flattery when i say,you have just created a masterpiece,soo i was wondering if there is going to be a hypothetical date that will announce when the next update arrives,it kinda will clam my excited nerves down a bit as i will know that i will have something to look forward to and be patient for,i am not asking you to provide a clear date,as i know that you are putting your all into it as can be seen from your writing but a hypothetical date..if possible
So. I just had to say, that this IF hooked me so bad, it was in my mind for the last 15 days straight, with no competition at all, even though I tried so hard to get inspired by sth new.
Well. Now I began this story anew - for the third time ☝🏻❤️
Yes! The song perfectly shows the manipulation by Morgan onto Modred and I admit, I had Modred play into the role of a loyal and obedient child to Morgan in this because I was reminded of that song. It's such a fitting theme song for Morgan for this twine I love it so much!
Oh my god I wasn't expecting to love this as much as I do! I'd say this is my current favorite game of the year! I'm so excited and eagerly awaiting new updates!
Pros:
I adore the relationships between all the characters. Every character feels genuine and lovable.
I also love the descriptions and world building.
The amount of choices makes this game so much fun and rewarding.
Seeing the character stats and relationships change, make the world feel real. I love this!
Love the LGBTQIA+ friendly story writing.
I enjoyed seeing the dialogues of other characters and I REALLY hope we see dialogue of the love interests thoughts on Mordred in the future as well!
Fixes To Make:
There are definitely a few typos here and there but not too many to be concerned with. Definitely needs a one-over to check them all.
Some descriptions of the world takes me out of the medieval fantasy world setting. Words like "sofa", "ice cream", "straw hat", "Mom" (instead of mother also due to the time period and the fact they are nobles) might benefit from being replaced by more olden day, time period accurate words.
Some of the game's chapters I felt dragged on a bit too long like the pre wedding ones where perhaps a day and then a time skip might've been better suited. Not a bad thing at all btw! The writing is amazing, I just wanted to get to interactions faster.
Overall this game is wonderful, I highly recommend others play it, and Llamagirl should be proud of the work they have created! <333
I love the world you've built! The characters are so complex, it's simply amazing❤️ I love how every RO we've Met so far has a unique personality and feels authentic. Though I might add that I'm too ivested in Galahads route to really consider any of the other's with more than Just curiosity. For me Galahads reactions to an innocent and kind Mordred are everything! I love his path of Independence he's taking, how he just melts more and more and becomes more than this imitation of his dad.
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So far, I really can't bring myself to like Morgana (As a person, I mean, not how she's written. She's written beautifully❤️).
I do think her hatred towards Uther and Camelot is completely justified, but she still ultimately chose to violate Arthur and bring an incestual child into the world, knowing that they would suffer. I felt my heart twist when Mordred and Morgana's relationship became strained but at the same time I can't in my right mind side with her even if I sympathize with her.
Really loving the story!
SAME! Having my Mordred feel like a tool for revenge but reveling in their purpose before having their view shattered when they make (gasp) more friends as an adult
Lmao that's exactly what my Mordred did!!
Meanwhile playing the game a solely vengeful Mordred breaks my heart. I feel so awful for being mean to Arthur, but at the same time I morbidly love the way that Morgana feeding a vengeful Mordred's hate ironically mirrors how Morgana claims that Merlin is manipulating and deceiving Arthur.
God it's so well-written, I love it.
I mean personally,i get your point however well i can see also see how Morgana might have also hold Arthur accountable (which i feel he is in a minor way) as he knowingly accepted the only place of power that could have granted Morgana to take back all that was her,but indeed the action she took to counter that was ultimately a vile with no justification..the same one done to her mother but it was one done by a person broken by injustices done to her..and at that point,i don't think she was thinking from her moral compess but utter desperation and extreme grief even a bit of insanity,in a messed up it is hard not to sympathise with her going to such extreme measures,as she was a child who not only lost her parents but witnessed destruction of all she hold dear
Umm,just out of curiosity is there any news on update of either the patreon or public version of the game?! So far it's been some while and there hasn't been a new update on either..soo yea!? Plus i was wondering is there any set time-limit or dates to these updates or are they random? If so that seems a slightly confusing and inconsistent no offense but i guess that's alright it's a masterpiece of work nonetheless.
There is a patreon version that was updated 24 days ago
Yup Ik although it was pretty small,it ended with niume using tarot cards on Modred
The author primarily updates her private patreon demo frequently, and really only updates the public demo once she has about a chapter done.
This is so amazing and interesting story. I hope author is alright, because it's been a long time since the last update. May i ask a questions of how many chapters will be in the book one, and when expect new updates?
The author is regularly posting on their Patreon (and replied to couple of posts here just a day earlier) so yeah, they're alright. It's just the public version of the demo has pretty low priority, so it doesn't get updated very often.
Such an amazing told story! :) I always hate the part of the day where I cant play in between...
Are you locked out of other romance options if you go for Gawain in chapter 3?
Thank you! ❤ And to answer your question, no. You can go for Gawain in chapter 3 (and 4, and 5), and break up later (on good terms or not) and pursue other ROs.
Thank you so much! I already dread the end of the Demo! But I know I can look forward to a full release ! <3
10/10 such an amazing game! I can't get enough of it. I hope all is well with you and can't wait to for updates!
I'm hooked! I really love the story, and all the characters in it. I'll be eagerly awaiting for future chapters to come! <3
Absolutely love the story
When this game is fully released is it planned on being free or paid? It might say somewhere but cant seem to find it, but if anyone knows I would quite like to know. Also if it would still be playable in browser without need of downloading.
Thank you! ❤ The fully released game will be paid (tho I don't have a price in mind yet, it's something I'll work out once it's done). My plan is to have it available both in browser and for download.
This game was an excellent choice for the New Year. I'm looking forward to what's coming next! <3
Wait how to you find the actual game? Like full thing, not just the demo
it isn't out yet! llamagirl is still writing boc, and will update the demo until chapter seven i believe? and then she'll upload the full first version of boc to patreon before releasing the full game on itch.
As someone who doesn't really know where to look for all this info knowing that it'll be updated til ch7 is awesome news for me! Honestly I'm so excited to see what happens and Thanks for writing your post? Comment? (Idk how to call it) But thank you for the information
accidentally named my dragon almost the exact same thing as Arthur's, lol
Don't know if this is something the Devs would consider adding but it would be nice to have an option for Mordred to have permanent draconic features ranging from Draconic Eyes, Partial Scales, Fangs, Tail, Talons and Wings. And you could either have only a few or all of them. Could be used as a sign for certain Dragon Riders as a way to showcase their deep connection with Dragons while people of the Pendragon bloodlines or whose bloodlines are strong enough to have more features. They could also make it where they are able to hide certain features if they want to for whatever reasons though if it was me, I wouldn't hide any of them.
only problem with that is that we being Arthur’s child and a few other things are supposed to be secret. Adding those features would be cool but a bit contradictory. After reaching a certain point maybe.
I suppose maybe instead of permanent features it could be enhancements like the scales that you can choose to get if you get on good enough terms with the dragons and SPOILER
the mages who helped create the Dragon Bloods in the first place.
SPOILER END
I wonder if Gareth will find lady Lynette
It's been so long since I've read an interactive story where I got genuinely super invested in everything happening, this is amazing so far!
Hell, it's so good that I'm leaving a comment on itch.io for the first time ever! I can't wait to see what's next.
(Also, I'm reaaaaally hoping we get the option to kill Lot one day)
I do not know who to romance ToT I JUST WANT BOTH GAWAIN, GALAHAD AND ELAINE TOT
Good route, I'm doing Nimue just because I want to see Merlin's head explode as spectacularly as possible.
Evil route, I've got no idea yet, since I'm limited to the demo, but probably Agravain once they show up
GALAHAD!!!!
DUDE I FEEL SO BD FOR ARTHUR :(((((
I decided to give him (ONE) chance, glad I did.
is it bad that i named my dragon gecko
no because now I want to name mine "gecko"
hope everything is going well?
Yes! Thanks for asking. Progress is steady but slow. I had a couple bad months (health-wise) , but now I'm feeling better. There isn't enough content yet for a public update, but I've been postig little updates to the demo on Patreon and ko-fi. I've been working on rewriting and expanding on the content featuring the dragon companion, and once I'm done with all of it there will be a public update, however I cannot give you an estimate as to when that would be yet.
Best of luck.
I truly hope things continue to get better for you - take care of yourself!!
Thank you for all the work you put in
This is absolutely amazing 😭🫶 I need more!! I like how there's various different choices to shape Mordred's character and her relationship with others. I'm looking forward to actually meeting Isac, I think he's gonna be the RO I would choose. Can't wait for the update 😍
Absolutely phenomenal, created an account just to follow this so that I can continue when it updates.
I also may or may not make a second run-through where I'm as much of a piece of **** to everyone as I possibly can.
Does anyone have any news on the author? Last I heard she was suffering from a health problem on her hands, I wonder if they're ok.
I love love love how much the interactions are affected by your past choices! You really get to shape your own character and the story responds in a way that feels natural
Lance and Arthur are so fucking..
For a few seconds i thought you didn't finish your sentence. Then I realized.
and guin sits in the cuck chair. obviously
I like this alot, sometimes made me cry because of the position of the mc or maybe because I relate to them. So so so so well written, very very interesting. I know you put all your effort in this, I can tell by the writing. I wish you goodluck on your progress!
ALSO WE LOVE KITTIES!! :3
Probably not, the author likely isn't comfortable making a quadruped/animal character a romance option. That and/or the author doesn't include that character as a RO because she has other plans (like some of the other non-romance-able characters)
Oh i didnt know sorry if i made ghings uncomfortable :(
It's alright, just keep in mind a lot of people are uncomfortable with quadruped creatures being a romanceable option!
this is so good! Love Elaine so much!
This is a really fun twine game!
Any news on the progress in chapter 5? I was kinda assuming there might would be an update in early October nonetheless i am sure it's going to turn out as perfection..take your time and do let us know if there is any progress UwU
hi, I encounter some error in chapter 5 at the choice where Morgana want us to learn about Elaine and the last choice “"I'll talk to her, to get to know her," you say carefully, "but I don't know if I want to play spy." It feels underhanded.”
I don’t know what this is all about but I want to let you know!
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lovely story! The angst and turmoil is so well written
just a small opinion: chapters 4 and 5 feels like the game is pushing Elaine onto you too hard, forcing you to be interested and befriend her even if it’s not romantic. It’s either spend time with Elaine or pages and pages of info dump, it’s kinda boring for players that have no interest in her. It would be great to have more of the other ROs as option to hang out, or even some other characters.
haha poor Gareth, Mordred seems to unintentionally hog the attention of their mother, and their uncle (or father-uncle in our case), and can go after the poor fellow's betrothed too - even if he's pretty nice about it all right now.
Great story so far, can't wait for the rest of chapter 5!! and justice for Gareth, best brother
Stealing the parental attention 💪 I don't think Gareth minds us stealing his betrothed, he's actually confirmed Aromantic (me fr!!)
Gods... I hope the rest of the story drops soon, otherwise I might implode in expectation. Goodjob llama! You've written a story worthy of Camelot!
this is easily THE best IF i have ever read. the amount of talent, skill, and creativity that has gone into this is genuinely astounding. i love this IF, but i cant help but hate that i have to wait to read more. anyways, im definitely looking forward to the next update.
side note: gawain route supremacy forever!!!!
Not to seem unappreciative of the work you put in your work and the astounding skill you get it,i can't help but feel a bit impatient..this whole storyline you have created is soo enticing and trust when i say i am not doing empty flattery when i say,you have just created a masterpiece,soo i was wondering if there is going to be a hypothetical date that will announce when the next update arrives,it kinda will clam my excited nerves down a bit as i will know that i will have something to look forward to and be patient for,i am not asking you to provide a clear date,as i know that you are putting your all into it as can be seen from your writing but a hypothetical date..if possible
Game's so good I feel like a six year old without any concept of patience in a line at Disney World
So. I just had to say, that this IF hooked me so bad, it was in my mind for the last 15 days straight, with no competition at all, even though I tried so hard to get inspired by sth new.
Well. Now I began this story anew - for the third time ☝🏻❤️
The song Modred’s lullaby reminds me of this so well.
I searched up the song because of this comment, I'm happy to say you are absolutely right.
Yes! The song perfectly shows the manipulation by Morgan onto Modred and I admit, I had Modred play into the role of a loyal and obedient child to Morgan in this because I was reminded of that song. It's such a fitting theme song for Morgan for this twine I love it so much!
I frickin love that song. ❤️
Oh my god I wasn't expecting to love this as much as I do! I'd say this is my current favorite game of the year! I'm so excited and eagerly awaiting new updates!
Pros:
Fixes To Make:
Overall this game is wonderful, I highly recommend others play it, and Llamagirl should be proud of the work they have created! <333
I love the world you've built! The characters are so complex, it's simply amazing❤️ I love how every RO we've Met so far has a unique personality and feels authentic. Though I might add that I'm too ivested in Galahads route to really consider any of the other's with more than Just curiosity. For me Galahads reactions to an innocent and kind Mordred are everything! I love his path of Independence he's taking, how he just melts more and more and becomes more than this imitation of his dad.
Awesome update in chapter 5 hoping for more anxiously.
danced with my worst enemy, my day has been made <3