This is absolutely amazing 😭🫶 I need more!! I like how there's various different choices to shape Mordred's character and her relationship with others. I'm looking forward to actually meeting Isac, I think he's gonna be the RO I would choose. Can't wait for the update 😍
I love love love how much the interactions are affected by your past choices! You really get to shape your own character and the story responds in a way that feels natural
I like this alot, sometimes made me cry because of the position of the mc or maybe because I relate to them. So so so so well written, very very interesting. I know you put all your effort in this, I can tell by the writing. I wish you goodluck on your progress!
Any news on the progress in chapter 5? I was kinda assuming there might would be an update in early October nonetheless i am sure it's going to turn out as perfection..take your time and do let us know if there is any progress UwU
hi, I encounter some error in chapter 5 at the choice where Morgana want us to learn about Elaine and the last choice “"I'll talk to her, to get to know her," you say carefully, "but I don't know if I want to play spy." It feels underhanded.”
I don’t know what this is all about but I want to let you know!
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lovely story! The angst and turmoil is so well written
just a small opinion: chapters 4 and 5 feels like the game is pushing Elaine onto you too hard, forcing you to be interested and befriend her even if it’s not romantic. It’s either spend time with Elaine or pages and pages of info dump, it’s kinda boring for players that have no interest in her. It would be great to have more of the other ROs as option to hang out, or even some other characters.
haha poor Gareth, Mordred seems to unintentionally hog the attention of their mother, and their uncle (or father-uncle in our case), and can go after the poor fellow's betrothed too - even if he's pretty nice about it all right now.
Great story so far, can't wait for the rest of chapter 5!! and justice for Gareth, best brother
this is easily THE best IF i have ever read. the amount of talent, skill, and creativity that has gone into this is genuinely astounding. i love this IF, but i cant help but hate that i have to wait to read more. anyways, im definitely looking forward to the next update.
Not to seem unappreciative of the work you put in your work and the astounding skill you get it,i can't help but feel a bit impatient..this whole storyline you have created is soo enticing and trust when i say i am not doing empty flattery when i say,you have just created a masterpiece,soo i was wondering if there is going to be a hypothetical date that will announce when the next update arrives,it kinda will clam my excited nerves down a bit as i will know that i will have something to look forward to and be patient for,i am not asking you to provide a clear date,as i know that you are putting your all into it as can be seen from your writing but a hypothetical date..if possible
So. I just had to say, that this IF hooked me so bad, it was in my mind for the last 15 days straight, with no competition at all, even though I tried so hard to get inspired by sth new.
Well. Now I began this story anew - for the third time ☝🏻❤️
Yes! The song perfectly shows the manipulation by Morgan onto Modred and I admit, I had Modred play into the role of a loyal and obedient child to Morgan in this because I was reminded of that song. It's such a fitting theme song for Morgan for this twine I love it so much!
Oh my god I wasn't expecting to love this as much as I do! I'd say this is my current favorite game of the year! I'm so excited and eagerly awaiting new updates!
Pros:
I adore the relationships between all the characters. Every character feels genuine and lovable.
I also love the descriptions and world building.
The amount of choices makes this game so much fun and rewarding.
Seeing the character stats and relationships change, make the world feel real. I love this!
Love the LGBTQIA+ friendly story writing.
I enjoyed seeing the dialogues of other characters and I REALLY hope we see dialogue of the love interests thoughts on Mordred in the future as well!
Fixes To Make:
There are definitely a few typos here and there but not too many to be concerned with. Definitely needs a one-over to check them all.
Some descriptions of the world takes me out of the medieval fantasy world setting. Words like "sofa", "ice cream", "straw hat", "Mom" (instead of mother also due to the time period and the fact they are nobles) might benefit from being replaced by more olden day, time period accurate words.
Some of the game's chapters I felt dragged on a bit too long like the pre wedding ones where perhaps a day and then a time skip might've been better suited. Not a bad thing at all btw! The writing is amazing, I just wanted to get to interactions faster.
Overall this game is wonderful, I highly recommend others play it, and Llamagirl should be proud of the work they have created! <333
I love the world you've built! The characters are so complex, it's simply amazing❤️ I love how every RO we've Met so far has a unique personality and feels authentic. Though I might add that I'm too ivested in Galahads route to really consider any of the other's with more than Just curiosity. For me Galahads reactions to an innocent and kind Mordred are everything! I love his path of Independence he's taking, how he just melts more and more and becomes more than this imitation of his dad.
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DUDE I FEEL SO BD FOR ARTHUR :(((((
I decided to give him (ONE) chance, glad I did.
is it bad that i named my dragon gecko
no because now I want to name mine "gecko"
hope everything is going well?
This is absolutely amazing 😭🫶 I need more!! I like how there's various different choices to shape Mordred's character and her relationship with others. I'm looking forward to actually meeting Isac, I think he's gonna be the RO I would choose. Can't wait for the update 😍
Absolutely phenomenal, created an account just to follow this so that I can continue when it updates.
I also may or may not make a second run-through where I'm as much of a piece of **** to everyone as I possibly can.
Does anyone have any news on the author? Last I heard she was suffering from a health problem on her hands, I wonder if they're ok.
I love love love how much the interactions are affected by your past choices! You really get to shape your own character and the story responds in a way that feels natural
Lance and Arthur are so fucking..
For a few seconds i thought you didn't finish your sentence. Then I realized.
and guin sits in the cuck chair. obviously
I like this alot, sometimes made me cry because of the position of the mc or maybe because I relate to them. So so so so well written, very very interesting. I know you put all your effort in this, I can tell by the writing. I wish you goodluck on your progress!
ALSO WE LOVE KITTIES!! :3
This is honestly better than I expected, those reddit comments do NOT play when it comes to IF recs. Off topic, what if we could romance a dragon
this is so good! Love Elaine so much!
This is a really fun twine game!
Any news on the progress in chapter 5? I was kinda assuming there might would be an update in early October nonetheless i am sure it's going to turn out as perfection..take your time and do let us know if there is any progress UwU
hi, I encounter some error in chapter 5 at the choice where Morgana want us to learn about Elaine and the last choice “"I'll talk to her, to get to know her," you say carefully, "but I don't know if I want to play spy." It feels underhanded.”
I don’t know what this is all about but I want to let you know!
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lovely story! The angst and turmoil is so well written
just a small opinion: chapters 4 and 5 feels like the game is pushing Elaine onto you too hard, forcing you to be interested and befriend her even if it’s not romantic. It’s either spend time with Elaine or pages and pages of info dump, it’s kinda boring for players that have no interest in her. It would be great to have more of the other ROs as option to hang out, or even some other characters.
haha poor Gareth, Mordred seems to unintentionally hog the attention of their mother, and their uncle (or father-uncle in our case), and can go after the poor fellow's betrothed too - even if he's pretty nice about it all right now.
Great story so far, can't wait for the rest of chapter 5!! and justice for Gareth, best brother
Gods... I hope the rest of the story drops soon, otherwise I might implode in expectation. Goodjob llama! You've written a story worthy of Camelot!
this is easily THE best IF i have ever read. the amount of talent, skill, and creativity that has gone into this is genuinely astounding. i love this IF, but i cant help but hate that i have to wait to read more. anyways, im definitely looking forward to the next update.
side note: gawain route supremacy forever!!!!
Not to seem unappreciative of the work you put in your work and the astounding skill you get it,i can't help but feel a bit impatient..this whole storyline you have created is soo enticing and trust when i say i am not doing empty flattery when i say,you have just created a masterpiece,soo i was wondering if there is going to be a hypothetical date that will announce when the next update arrives,it kinda will clam my excited nerves down a bit as i will know that i will have something to look forward to and be patient for,i am not asking you to provide a clear date,as i know that you are putting your all into it as can be seen from your writing but a hypothetical date..if possible
So. I just had to say, that this IF hooked me so bad, it was in my mind for the last 15 days straight, with no competition at all, even though I tried so hard to get inspired by sth new.
Well. Now I began this story anew - for the third time ☝🏻❤️
The song Modred’s lullaby reminds me of this so well.
I searched up the song because of this comment, I'm happy to say you are absolutely right.
Yes! The song perfectly shows the manipulation by Morgan onto Modred and I admit, I had Modred play into the role of a loyal and obedient child to Morgan in this because I was reminded of that song. It's such a fitting theme song for Morgan for this twine I love it so much!
I frickin love that song. ❤️
Oh my god I wasn't expecting to love this as much as I do! I'd say this is my current favorite game of the year! I'm so excited and eagerly awaiting new updates!
Pros:
Fixes To Make:
Overall this game is wonderful, I highly recommend others play it, and Llamagirl should be proud of the work they have created! <333
I love the world you've built! The characters are so complex, it's simply amazing❤️ I love how every RO we've Met so far has a unique personality and feels authentic. Though I might add that I'm too ivested in Galahads route to really consider any of the other's with more than Just curiosity. For me Galahads reactions to an innocent and kind Mordred are everything! I love his path of Independence he's taking, how he just melts more and more and becomes more than this imitation of his dad.
Awesome update in chapter 5 hoping for more anxiously.
danced with my worst enemy, my day has been made <3
jaw dropped when i checked in for an update, I cannot get enough